It's 3am now
Would this be early or late?
Time is relative
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Too awake to sleep
Too lethargic to do work
I just let time pass
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Sitting on a chair
Nothing is happening - Good
Let's keep it this way
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Tomorrow is here
But I don't get to start it
Until 8am
Wednesday, April 30
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Hey PaPa,
Nice thoughts there...
As some would say,
this poem "got ink". lol
I like it how you put your
situation into just 3 lines...
Very clever.
I look up "Haikus" and it says,
1. A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines...
2. A poem written in this form.
Not bad a poem I would say.
I like the last part...
For once I thought you should put down "Today" instead of "Tomorrow", but you are right, in order to start it... I guess
your night duty ends at 8am?
Good try! Hope to read more.(Hey you've got talent, la)
Thanks for dropping by
These stuff are amateurish
You are way too kind
Haikus need to fit
5-7-5 syllabic form
So "today" won't do
Oh, ya, the 5-7-5 rule... I wonder how long you took to get this done?
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